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  • Sharpenย Yourย Review:ย Practicalย Adviceย forย Reviewers

    Sharpenย Yourย Review:ย Practicalย Adviceย forย Reviewers

    Good morning, good afternoon, and good evening, Compliance Rockstars, Clinical Research Professionals, Ethics Enthusiasts, and Investigators from around the globe! 230+ subscribers and counting!

    I hope everyone has been doing well! It feels good to be writing to you all again. I absolutely love knowledge sharing and learning from others. As Iโ€™ve also mentioned in a previous post, writing has always been beneficial towards my mental health. Whatโ€™s even better is knowing that blog posts can help folks in the research and compliance space to think differently. Or perhaps, enhance their current thinking on a particular subject.

    In essence, I love to help people and explain complex topics in an easy format.

    I would like to share top strategies to sharpen how to review your institution’s protocols. As a general reminder, these are my own interpretations. Any legal information discussed within this post should be discussed with your institution.

    Sharpen your pencils folks and let’s begin:


    Research the research

    Have you ever been confused by an investigator’s proposed research protocol?

    Perhaps the investigator is using jargon only well known in their field. The same can go for undefined acronyms. Just because the investigator knows their proposed research so well, doesn’t mean the reviewer has that same level of knowledge. The easy route would be to send back as one of your revisions the following:

    “Avoid using technical jargon and define acronyms. This should be written in a way that anyone can understand.”

    Of course, this can be one of your revisions…but what I’m proposing here is to dig deeper. See what you can learn about the proposed research yourself.

    With everyone extremely busy, it can feel like you’re trying to just pump out reviews as fast as you can. Let me provide an example:

    Maybe your first go-to resource is seeing how other IRBs have reviewed similar research proposals.

    Sure, you can do this. This is a great way to see how other reviewers at other institutions review similar projects. Consider the following hypothetical example:

    • The researcher would like to see how well their device can measure the average calories participants burn in a day.
    • Their device is a wearable (i.e., a wristband).
    • They want to compare this device with a device currently on the market (e.g., Fitbit).
    • Their device is also linked to an app they created that will be downloaded to a participant’s phone.
    • From the app, the researcher would like to obtain physiological and geospatial data.

    At first glance, you may think…wow there are a lot of moving parts here. You may automatically wonder if FDA regulations apply in addition to the Common Rule. Or maybe, your head is spinning because you have no clue where to start. I urge you to think about the study design itself:

    1. You know the study team plans to compare their device to a Fitbit.
    2. You may already know that Fitbit has an app that is downloaded to a user’s phone.

    By researching the research, I propose to take the following action…

    1. Read through the Fitbit instruction manual,
    2. Review the instructions provided:
      • How to install the Fitbit app on your phone,
      • How to care for the Fitbit,
      • How to troubleshoot for an error, etc.
    3. Any potential risks listed by using the Fitbit,
    4. Any permissions required to ensure the Fitbit app accurately tracks your data

    By understanding the mechanism behind the proposed research, you will start to notice your questions coming together:

    1. Did the study team provide instructions on how to use the device?
    2. Did the study team consider all potential risks and how to mitigate these risks?
    3. Did the study team indicate the specific data measures that’ll be collected from the device’s app?
    4. Did the study team list what permissions are required from the participant’s phone to successfully use the app?
    5. Did the study team consider if their app must be integrated with other apps on the participant’s phone (e.g., the Health app)?

    By researching the research, you will find yourself asking the more critical questions. You should always consider what others are doing and regulations but try to put yourself in the researcher’s shoes. Help the researcher make their proposal that much more thought-out! By working together, we can help the researcher improve their protocol design. As a reviewer, you will start to think about the more in-depth questions to ensure adequate participant protections.

    The split-screen hack

    As a reviewer, we know we can have countless documents to review. This can be a daunting task in itself.

    On top of that, it can take a lot of time to ensure consistencies within various sections of the protocol.

    I would argue that the protocol is the most important document in a researcher’s proposal. The protocol how many important sections ranging from objectives to data collection methods, and so forth. I propose to use the “split-screen” function in Microsoft Word when reviewing the protocol document.

    What is the “split” function in Microsoft Word?

    By enabling this function, it essentially “splits” the document in half horizontally:

    • You will notice two scroll bars on the upper and lower half of the screen.
    • On the upper half of the screen, you can look at a certain section of the document.
    • On the lower part of the screen, you can look at a completely different section within the same document!

    Why would this be helpful, you may ask?

    This is particularly useful with long protocol documents. Let’s take the example of reviewing a study’s objective against the data collection methods. In a perfect world, these two sections within the protocol would be consistent with one another. Sometimes, they aren’t. Also, depending on the protocol, the objectives could be the first section of the protocol. Then, the data collection methods could be somewhere in the middle of the protocol.

    In lieu of scrolling back and forth in hopes you catch the inconsistencies; this ensures you absolutely catch any inconsistencies!

    This hack is a time saver.

    You can access this function in Microsoft Word using the steps below:

    1. Under the “Review” ribbon, within the “Window” section select “Split”.
    2. When you no longer need to use this, simply select “Remove Split” following the same steps listed in Step 1.

    Streamline documenting common errors you see on protocols

    What type of research does your institution typically review? Perhaps SBER?

    Let’s roll with this example. Say within SBER, you notice many of the submission you review conduct surveys and interviews. Maybe these submissions include observations or focus groups as data collection methods. Now, I want you to take a moment and reflect. Are there common errors you see within protocols that you always need the researcher to address?

    If you said “Yes”, then I recommend streamlining common errors you see into a template.

    By this, I mean creating a document with standard reviewer comments. The document should contain standard verbiage that can be easily copied, pasted, and fine-tuned depending on the study you’re reviewing. It’s difficult to have standardized verbiage for proposed research, so I recommend starting with what you see the most. You can slowly build your list of common errors as you see different types of proposed research.

    This efficiency tip isn’t just for you. This is something that should be shared!

    I encourage you all to share these standard errors you commonly see within protocols with your team members. Help the team be efficient in the review process. You can even make it a living document where team members can comment on what they see in their reviews. It’s always important to have multiple sets of eyes for something like this. Someone else can think of something you didn’t even consider. It’s important to not only develop yourself, but also help your team thrive! Dive into success together.

    Promote transparency in your communication with investigators

    Has anyone ever told you to do something, and you ask why this action is necessary?

    I know I have! I personally love to understand how things work. So, if someone says, “Hey, go do this”, I need to know why I have to. I need to understand why this particular step is important in the process. The same goes for researchers. They are inquisitive in nature. Therefore, if you’re asking a researcher to make a specific change in their protocol, tell them why this change matters.

    Say you’re reviewing a consent form within the researcher’s application, and you notice there isn’t a statement about participant risk.

    The researcher comes back and says, “Well, there isn’t any major risk to my study. I don’t see a point in saying this.”

    This is where the “why” to your “ask” comes into play. Sure, you state that addressing risk is a regulatory requirement (i.e., basic element of consent). You should also state that the participant should be aware if risks are present. The participant should have all the details necessary for them to make an informed decision to participate. If there are no foreseeable risks or discomforts, then the participant should be aware of this. This can impact the participant’s decision-making process. By explaining these concepts to the researcher, they will be more inclined to incorporate this statement into the consent form. They will also be mindful of this in future submissions.

    Reflect on oddball situations

    Have you ever had a submission that was outside of the norm? Did the review process require additional steps that typically wouldn’t be required?

    Now – I want you to imagine you came across another submission of this nature. Do you remember everything you did when you came across this oddball review the first time? Did you do your due diligence and document the process? Maybe you intended to but were caught up in another task and oops…you forgot. Here, I’d like to promote the IRB Precedent Tool. This is a structured way of documenting these oddball situations.

    You can incorporate key details of:

    • The situation itself,
    • Steps you took during the review process,
    • Any regulatory information that assisted you in making a determination, etc.

    Unsure what I’m talking about? You can read more about this brilliant approach here: Steps toward a System of IRB Precedent: Piloting Approaches to Summarizing IRB Decisions for Future Use

    Stay current with regulations and developments in the field

    This…I must admit is a tough tip to implement.

    With all the regulatory updates and publications coming out like clockwork, this can feel overwhelming. You can attempt this via:

    • Signing up for various agency newsletters (e.g., FDA if you have mainly biomedical research). Another great one is the Office of Human Research Protections (OHRP).
    • Rely on newsletters from various organizations such as PRIM&R for these types of updates.
    • Check the Federal Register daily for any new rules or notices.
    • Check agency websites daily for any regulatory updates.
    • Review journals on a daily basis for developments in the field (e.g., Ethics and Human Research).

    You can split the proposed tips above if you have multiple team members. One person (or multiple) can focus on regulatory updates while others focus on recent publications.

    But what about those with small HRPP offices where there could be only 1-2 people?

    Time for a little self-promotion. An excellent starting point would be to follow along this blog’s monthly posts (even if you aren’t in a small HRPP):

    • Research Compliance Chronicle (see the first edition here): a comprehensive review of regulatory updates from the previous month including:
      • Agency-specific news, policy updates, and new rules
      • Presidential actions (i.e., executive orders)
      • Proposed bills that can potentially impact research and compliance
    • RAC Digest (see the first edition here): a comprehensive review of recent developments in the research administration and compliance fields from the previous month including updates from journals such as:
      • Accountability in Research,
      • AJOB Empirical Bioethics,
      • JAMA, and many more!

    Leverage experiences from senior personnel

    Knowledge sharing is a hallmark in an optimal institution’s review committee.

    You might remember what it was like when you first started your career as a research reviewer. Remember being overwhelmed – thinking – how could I possibly learn all this? Well, this is where knowledge sharing comes into play. Senior personnel are the hidden gems within a review committee. Why? They’ve likely seen many types of proposed research throughout their career. Not only common types of research projects, but also oddball scenarios. Leverage their expertise and learn from them. Explain your thought process on a particular scenario. Senior personnel will likely provide insights that you didn’t initially think about.

    Consult with subject-matter experts

    Having a diverse network of subject-matter experts to consult can aid the review process.

    Engage with subject-matter experts when the particular topic within the proposed research is out of your purview. Similar to the tip above, these folks can provide the specific knowledge needed to ensure a comprehensive review. An example of this could include security concerns about an app the research proposes to use in their project. Building this diverse network of these folks can give you a shoulder to lean on to ensure adequate participant protection.


    I hope you found this post useful!

  • Top Tips for Medical Writing vs. Scientific Writing

    Top Tips for Medical Writing vs. Scientific Writing

    Authored/ Reviewed by Tasha Mohseni

    Contribution by Adnan Shaikh

    Good morning, good afternoon, and good evening Compliance Rockstars, Clinical Researchers, Ethics Educators, and Investigators from around the globe!

    I hope you are doing well! I can’t believe we are already in February 2025. It feels like just yesterday I was celebrating New Years Eve with my loved ones.

    In this post, I plan to define medical writing versus scientific writing. Then, Adnan will end the post with helpful tips for both medical and scientific writing.

    I would like to thank Adnan Shaikh for his willingness to contribute to this post!

    Let’s get ready to learn! As a general reminder, these are our own interpretations. Any legal information discussed within this post should be discussed with your institution.


    What is medical writing?

    Medical writing can be defined as the process of creating scientific and clinical documents related to:

    • Healthcare,
    • Medicine, and
    • Life sciences

    This type of writing typically yields the following types of content:

    • Regulatory documentation,
    • Research publications,
    • Educational materials related to healthcare, medicine, and life sciences, and
    • Promotional content for healthcare professionals and patients

    To be a successful medical writer, it is recommended to acquire skills in:

    • Understanding of medical and scientific concepts
    • Strong writing and communication skills
    • Ability to interpret and summarize complex data
    • Knowledge of regulatory guidelines (e.g., FDA)
    • Proficiency in literature searching and referencing

    What is scientific writing?

    Scientific writing is the structured dissemination of research findings, theories, and technical information in a clear and objective manner. This type of writing is commonly used in the following fields:

    • Academia,
    • Medical field, and
    • Technical fields (e.g., engineering)

    When I think about scientific writing, not only do I think about research publications I also think about research documentation.

    What do I mean by “research documentation”?

    Well, I mean your research protocol! To be a strong scientific writer, it is essential to:

    • Explain complex ideas in a concise format
    • Avoid technical jargon (i.e., write in a way that anyone who is not in your field would understand)
    • Use credible references to support your hypothesis
    • Let graphics and tables enhance the “research story” you’re trying to tell

    Is there truly a difference between these writing styles?

    To be honest here, I would say that I am well versed in scientific writing. I had to do some research and learn about what is considered medical writing. Even though I explained the differences here, if you’re scratching your head right now you maybe wondering…

    Tasha, there’s so much overlap. Aren’t these pretty much the same thing?

    I was feeling the same way! Even when I was doing my research on what constitutes medical writing, scientific writing would often appear! Therefore, I decided to go to my old friend, ChatGPT. First, I prompted ChatGPT to create a Venn diagram of medical writing versus scientific writing.

    For those who may not know, a Venn diagram is an illustration of two overlapping circles comparing two topics. In the area where the circles intersect, these are similarities between the two topics. Outside of the circle overlap, are the differences between the two topics.

    Below is the result from ChatGPT:

    Venn diagram comparing medical writing to scientific writing created by ChatGPT

    Though I technically haven’t done medical writing, I can see the significant overlap with scientific writing! It makes sense to me now why when I was researching medical writing, scientific writing often popped up.

    Next, I prompted ChatGPT to put this into a table for comparison:

    Tabular comparison of medical writing versus scientific writing created by ChatGPT

    What I love about this table even more than the Venn diagram is how ChatGPT defined these writing styles based on:

    • Content
    • Sentence structure
    • Audience

    I feel these components are so important! I almost wished I started out knowing this comparison.

    I wouldn’t have driven myself bonkers trying to figure it out for myself!

    Now that we have a better understanding of this, let’s see what top tips Adnan has to offer us!

    Top tips for medical writing

    Hello researchers, I am glad to be here once again. I’m excited to share my top tips for successful medical writing!

    Remember to rely on the following organizations below : 

    These associations provide many informational resources for professionals or novice learners, such as books and webinars. These materials will guide you on your journey to improve your medical writing skills. They will also help in understanding novel approaches in this field. 

    Other essential key skills for medical writing are:

    • Proficiency in the English language,
    • Ability to simplify medical and scientific terminologies,
    • Knowledge of clinical research, regulatory bodies, and ICH GCP Guidelines,
    • Proofreading of the content,
    • Ability to interpret complex research content, and
    • Knowledge of statistics

    I recommend writing in a daily gratitude journal and to connect with other seasoned medical writers. With knowledge sharing and daily practice, you will be on your way to mastering this skill!

    One bonus tip I’d like to offer is to complete an internship or get training by the organizations mentioned above. Whether you’re experienced or new to the field, these top tips will mold you to become a better medical writer.

    Top tips for scientific writing

    Scientific writing is completed by researchers from various backgrounds. Completing an academic project within my PharmD program provided the exposure I needed to grow in this area. You can review my publications here as a sample of scientific writing:

    1. Pemphigus Vulgaris: An Overview
    2. An Observational Prospective Study on Drugs Utilization Pattern in Cardiovascular Diseases at a Tertiary Care Hospital

    Once you’ve reviewed my work, take a look to see how I applied my top tips for scientific writing:

    The Do’sThe “Don’t”s
    1. Find gaps in published literature that could lead to your research question.
    2. Prepare content simultaneously. While conducting your literature search, use this time to also list your references.
    3. Use active and passive appropriately.
    4. Define abbreviations and acronyms when first introducing them in your paper.
    5. Always read the journal authors’ instructions in depth. This is to ensure your work is suitable for the journal of interest.
    1. Avoid filler words such as “like” or “you know”.
    2. Avoid using the same word repetitively; this often happens with transition words.
    3. Avoid directly copying and pasting as this leads to plagiarism. Further, if Artificial Intelligence (AI) tools were used to generate your content, you must credit this tool in your paper.
    4. Avoid errors by ALWAYS proofreading your content before submitting to the journal for review.

    Always remember that practice makes perfect! I’d like to express gratitude to Tasha for providing me this space to showcase my ideas and thought with you.


    We hope you found this post insightful!